Suggestions [Osmond]
Overall solid class. Perhaps give rubrics out for the paper when they are assigned to make it easier to know what you are looking for in our writing. I enjoyed the theme of the class, very easy to relate to.
Author Archives: Jared Osmond
Thesis Restatement [Osmond]
Military technology has become more efficient by easing the workload for personal or even eliminating the need for being on the battlefield, yet it faces criticism because of the potential of collateral damage and invasion of privacy.
Prospectus [Osmond]
For my research paper, I would like to focus on the increased strength in military weaponry. With the increased power, I believe that militaries across the globe will increase their lethality which will lead to deadlier wars. Ever since countries have Continue reading
Frankenstein Feedback [Osmond]
Her essay was well thought out and supported her claim that Victor’s ultimate mistake was leaving the monster. I feel that throughout the essay, however, there was a lack of transition sentences. The lack of transition sentences makes the essay Continue reading
Frankienstien Short Thoughts [Osmond]
In the novel, Frankenstein Mary Shelley conveys that technology should be closely monitored otherwise, left unsupervised, it will spiral out of control. The creature in Frankenstein wants to be accepted by others as seen when he tries to make friends with the Continue reading
Long Sentence [Osmond]
When Patrick Marleau, a former captain and ten year veteran with the San Jose Sharks, being drafted by them second overall in the 1997 NHL Entry Draft, second to his former teammate, Joe Thornton, was traded to the Toronto Maple Continue reading
Rhetorical Analysis Final [Osmond]
In “An Open Letter to Bill Bennet” by Milton Friedman, Friedman tries to persuade Bennet to reconsider their stance on the War on Drugs to a more forgiving method of going after drug users. Bennet uses forms of pathos, Continue reading
Technology Final [Osmond]
In our age, technology has allowed us to connect with our friends and peers in an instant making the world a smaller place. My sister and I grew up with technology taking hold of our lives since we were in Continue reading
Gibbon Sentence [Osmond]
Technology has made us able to connect with people across the globe, making our world much smaller. Exchanging news, culture, and ideas happen in an instant since we are all connected. However, technology does have its flaws. Online people can Continue reading
“This is Water” [Osmond]
Genres allow people to understand or give us a set of expectations of what we are about to read or listen to. If one is about to analyze a research paper, they can expect to find the essay filled with Continue reading