In Mina’s essay of Frankenstein she addresses how the creature should not have been abandoned by Victor and how this was the biggest mistake. This shifted my perspective as she had several good counterarguments to my idea that the biggest Continue reading
The best part about this paper was the clear thesis and strong stance on the topic. They also did a good job with acknowledging the counterargument and giving evidence on their argument. The big idea of this paper was that Continue reading
Review of Annette’s paper- I made some small grammar fixes, and one or two notes throughout the essay, and I like your thesis a lot. I also really like how specific evidence is utilized in every paragraph. It starts to Continue reading
Overall this paper was very well written. I really liked how it was structured out with each topic being its own paragraph. However, I found that it lacked many connection to the theme of the class or technology in general. Continue reading
I read Sprosty’s essay, and the quality of it was overall good with only a few mistakes. He clearly stated his stance on the topic within the first paragraph. He had chosen that Frankenstein’s gravest mistake was abandoning the creature and Continue reading
After reading this essay, there are many positive aspects that can be identified. She starts off with a strong introduction where she clearly states what she will be arguing throughout her writing. She believes that Victor’s major mistake in the Continue reading
After reading this essay, I found that the argument is well stated. From the different essays I have already read in my small group, you had a different introduction that I really enjoyed. It was more interesting to see you Continue reading
All of my comments on your google document are going to be pretty much the same as here. Instead of saying “I believe” or “think”, you should be more assertive with your claim to make your argument seem more confident. Continue reading
Her essay was well thought out and supported her claim that Victor’s ultimate mistake was leaving the monster. I feel that throughout the essay, however, there was a lack of transition sentences. The lack of transition sentences makes the essay Continue reading
The essay Ryan A. wrote was overall pretty good. The intro is generally pretty solid, with a few word choice problems and small fixes to make, with a good thesis. The first body paragraph I thought had way too much Continue reading
