The big idea of the essay is that the monster could have been saved from his actions if Victor had nurtured him instead of abandoning him. The arguments towards this main idea are all strong and well thought out. However, Continue reading
Response to Derin’s Essay In response to your essay, Derin, I thought that your argument was clear and a very good idea to base the paper on, possibly because I chose to write on the same topic. You do take Continue reading
The overall essay argues a very well thought out position on Frankenstein’s mistake and the quotes used are well incorporated to back up the argument. The points mention in the thesis are relevant and have good support from the novel Continue reading
This paper was pretty straightforward and I think hit all the necessary points in the needed. The individual made their argument clear by clearly picking a side, which was Victor’s mistake was creating the monster, and then including arguments and Continue reading
The Frankenstein paper which I read was very well put together and even though he did not yet have all of it completed yet I could tell much time was invested into the paper. The writer used elevated diction with Continue reading
Your paper begins with a brief summary and analysis of Victor’s intentions while attempting to bring the creature to life. Including that the creature did, indeed, come from death is an important point that I am glad to see you Continue reading
I think that the essay would benefit a lot with a strongly-worded thesis at the beginning so the readers understand what exactly is being argued. An introductory paragraph that relates to the outside world more so than a plot summary Continue reading
Your introduction paragraph starts off well, with a good hook that also summarizes the part of frankenstein that is relevant to the prompt. However, immediately after, you introduce a counterargument. This would be fine, but you simply state that there Continue reading
In my classmates Frankenstein piece, he addressed many ideas that switched my perspective from how I originally viewed the story. Initially I did not think the monster or Victor had any reason to be victims of what they complained about. The monster Continue reading
Review of Eddy Flores’s essay. In Eddy’s Frankenstein essay the main idea is that the biggest mistake made by Victor Frankenstein was creating the creature and not taking responsibility of this act by nurturing and raising it in a humanly Continue reading
