The Frankenstein paper which I read was very well put together and even though he did not yet have all of it completed yet I could tell much time was invested into the paper. The writer used elevated diction with no apparent grammatically errors and good transitions which made it a smooth read. For some of the points he is trying to make, the only thing he needs to do is back it up with evidence. But I’m sure since he is not yet finished that is something he will have the opportunity to do. Along with the evidence to support his claims, and a strong conclusion which is soon to come the writers essay will come together quite nicely.